- Use less text
So if you feel that should have text for a particular slide to explain it easier, try point format and be precise. 3, 4 bullet points with up to 6, 7 words per each bullet will be ideal.
- Communicate your idea with pictures
- Use simple animations
And of course you should not have these complex explanations in your presentation if you do not think that you MUST have them.
- Less slides and good formatting
- 10-20-30 Rule
In brief it says
10 slides only
20 minutes presentation time
30 font size
Here is his explanation on how it will be effective.
And I have some final tip for the audience. If your colleague is doing a presentation for academic purposes and you are supposed to give feedback, please provide the real feedback you have. Do not say that it was amazing just because you think that your friend will feel bad if you didn't do so. I specifically mentioned academic because I believe when it comes to business, it is most probable to have the real feedback since it is business. :)
I personally had this practice of being nice and trying to avoid giving bad feedback and suddenly I realized that I am taking away the change of my colleague to further improve his/her presentation skills. This can be something simple like 'You spoke too fast' but if he improve that, it will help a lot to attract more audience next time. You can of course be polite and convey it nicely, so that it will really help the presenter to improve himself/herself. And may be you can give written feedback too.
So good luck with your next presentation :)